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Continued 3H
Jul. 27th, 2005 12:38 pm(Yeah, I know, some people don't consider 85-90F hot.)(With dewpoints around 70F.)
Got suggestions back on GHOST POINT from the Nice Agent Lady, cut some of one character's POV early on, just glimpses, add in some stuff that eases back on the open bigotry of the Male Lead in way of Political Correctness, resolve a few points later on that seemed to skip a couple of days of space without warning. She said the ending made her cry -- not bad for a case-hardened New York City literary agent.
So we dumps the work on Chapter IV of PENDRAGON AUTUMN, we does, and resets to a different universe for a week or so, and mail revised manuscript of GHOST POINT off for delivery to the Nice Editor Lady, who will (if she chooses to accept it) offer her own opinions. Thus the writing life.
And I haven't heard back from the bike shop on re-spoking the rear wheel. I want that bike for tomorrow morning, as I have a project meeting in the afternoon.
Got suggestions back on GHOST POINT from the Nice Agent Lady, cut some of one character's POV early on, just glimpses, add in some stuff that eases back on the open bigotry of the Male Lead in way of Political Correctness, resolve a few points later on that seemed to skip a couple of days of space without warning. She said the ending made her cry -- not bad for a case-hardened New York City literary agent.
So we dumps the work on Chapter IV of PENDRAGON AUTUMN, we does, and resets to a different universe for a week or so, and mail revised manuscript of GHOST POINT off for delivery to the Nice Editor Lady, who will (if she chooses to accept it) offer her own opinions. Thus the writing life.
And I haven't heard back from the bike shop on re-spoking the rear wheel. I want that bike for tomorrow morning, as I have a project meeting in the afternoon.
