It isn't bad*, and she doesn't do anything atrocious to Brian. Not really a story, though, more of an incident. No conflict-crisis-resolution pyramid, not enough space for atmosphere or character development...
*For 10th grade English values of bad, which can constitute an atrocity and an abomination.
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Date: 2007-01-04 02:54 am (UTC)*For 10th grade English values of bad, which can constitute an atrocity and an abomination.