Apr. 30th, 2007

Still damp

Apr. 30th, 2007 10:36 am
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Gray morning, mizzle, probably rain later.  The weather radar implies that the rain will be noticeable, and forecasts threw in a possibility of thunder.  Thus endeth April.

Poked more at the transformation of POWERS from first-person to third this morning.  I haven't tried to do this on any previous story, and the results seem . . . mixed.  Having trouble getting the same sense of immediacy.  I wonder if I'd be better off starting from scratch, rather than backtracking from a wrong beginning.  Just toss the whole story in the bit bucket.  It's not as if I have a deadline or anything.

That old saying about sausages and laws comes to mind.  You probably are better off not knowing how stories are made.

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