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Still damp
Apr. 30th, 2007 10:36 amGray morning, mizzle, probably rain later. The weather radar implies that the rain will be noticeable, and forecasts threw in a possibility of thunder. Thus endeth April.
Poked more at the transformation of POWERS from first-person to third this morning. I haven't tried to do this on any previous story, and the results seem . . . mixed. Having trouble getting the same sense of immediacy. I wonder if I'd be better off starting from scratch, rather than backtracking from a wrong beginning. Just toss the whole story in the bit bucket. It's not as if I have a deadline or anything.
That old saying about sausages and laws comes to mind. You probably are better off not knowing how stories are made.
Poked more at the transformation of POWERS from first-person to third this morning. I haven't tried to do this on any previous story, and the results seem . . . mixed. Having trouble getting the same sense of immediacy. I wonder if I'd be better off starting from scratch, rather than backtracking from a wrong beginning. Just toss the whole story in the bit bucket. It's not as if I have a deadline or anything.
That old saying about sausages and laws comes to mind. You probably are better off not knowing how stories are made.
