Are we there yet?

Two more chapters to go on DRAGON'S TEETH. Got the manuscript back from Older Son, who had passed it around to some naive readers for the "stand-alone" test, and they didn't claim any need for additional back-story. Couldn't use him or Wife for this aspect, as they have read DRAGON'S EYE.

Maybe I've fixed it? We'll see what the Nice Editor Lady says. Got the advance check, so I guess I owe her a manuscript sometime -- did _not_ get the contract yet, so I'm vague on when "sometime" will arrive. Publishing remains a strange world, as strange as any Fantasy or Science Fiction universe.

Icicles six to eight feet long hanging from the eaves -- don't stand underneath.

Full Moon

Moonlight on fresh snow,
Silver billow and sable shadow,
Icy breath and stars.